Talk:The Cloud Minders

From the Appendices section:


 * Is it really believable that Ardana, a Federation member planet is resorting to the use of torture? Is the Federation totally oblivious of all that goes on in this world? Perhaps their reliance on Zenite makes them turn a blind-eye to this world's social plight.
 * Captain Kirk appears unaware that sealing the cave enterance will lead to asphixiation. When Vanna points out that they will die Kirk believes she's refering to the Zenite gas, which Vanna denies. Later, Plasus and Vanna emplore Kirk to get them out because they are running out of oxygen.
 * The scene where Spock, Kirk and Mccoy are in the Transporter room, talking to Plasus via a video hookup, has what looks like and exact copy of a modern 42" plasma TV.

Does this stuff really need to be in the article? I can see maybe leaving the second one but the other two don't seem like something that should be included.– CapnCrunch 16:16, July 30, 2010 (UTC)