Need help here with this article: Borg fusion cube. 65.163.112.181 06:01, 15 May 2008 (UTC)
- Ok, well first, you don't need to create a forum post for every article you "need help" with, every article has a talk page, this sort of thing should go there (which is why I moved it said talk page). I have re-written the article with the correct point-of-view and formatting. I suggest you compare your version and mine to get some idea of how you should be writing articles here. The main problem was the point-of-view - Memory Beta is written from an in-universe perspective, so hints on player tactics for the game are not the sort of thing that should be included in the article. --8of5 19:23, 15 May 2008 (UTC)
- so hints on player tactics for the game are not the sort of thing that should be included in the article. These might make an acceptable discourse in the "Background" section appendices..
- The difference is to separate the two POVs. Write the article from the point-of-view of a person writing about the spaceship, then write the background from the POV of the person writing about a video game. -- Captain MKB 22:31, 15 May 2008 (UTC)
- Indeed, I tired to keep some of that information in the appendices. Another thing the original article had which is a big no no is rather a lot of speculation. Armada II makes no reference multiphasic shielding obtained from Seven of Nine's parents and the fusions cubes in game certainly have no where near a crew of a million drones! --8of5 23:29, 15 May 2008 (UTC)