Information removal[]
An anonymous IP removed several lines of info -- any reason or should we revert? -- Captain MKB 00:13, 26 January 2009 (UTC)
- The article was cluttered with extraneous information -- it isn't biographically relevant what two other characters were doing when Vennoss reported to them. Current version is streamlined and cleaner. --75.168.140.54 00:23, 26 January 2009 (UTC)
I disagree thogh -- any description of Venoss's appearance is biographically relevant, but you deleted it? I think this was a mistake and should be corrected. -- Captain MKB 00:27, 26 January 2009 (UTC)
- That should probably be readded, but the other part (about reporting) may not be necessary. The date also needs to be added in somewhere so that you can tell when it happened (not a big thing). And I moved her rank to the beginning to make it a little more "streamlined".--Long Live the United Earth 00:31, 26 January 2009 (UTC)
Thanks for streamlining; the other part I'd consider relevant because it was the trial run for Pazlar's holotank. But whatever. --Captain Savar 02:30, 26 January 2009 (UTC)